A Cloud Above My Shoulders
Alone up There
In the middle of nowhere
I face the open unknown
With a cloud above my shoulder
And a gaze towards yonder
I pray...
That you would be there
Some where
Feeling my rain
And I wonder...
Will your sun .. Someday
brighten my heart Again??
I wonder...
posted by Rawand @ 4/29/2005 01:30:00 AM
7 Comments:
Welcome to the enchanting world of blogging. I am a newcomer myself and find myself increasingly fascinated by the brilliant voices I come across while visiting.
beautiful words... beautiful beautiful
enchanting indeed noony, 'don't want the pell to leave me
*@@* nooni .. beautiful is what beautiful see
thank you both & welcom to R.M. :)
Please take a minute to visit this blog, where this poem features and is the subject of a debate My Life In Simple Words
Its true I had posted your poem on my blog and its true I hadn't posted the credits.
I admit that was wrong and I have decided to remove it least it should cause more havoc that it was intended to.
Hope you will accept my apologies.
Ps: But I was the anonymous post asking whether I should post your poems on my blog
Mama JunkYard:
Thanks for stoping by, and for caring to draw my attention to this debate. Unfortunately I tried the links you posted both here and in the email you sent me, but it seems both are broken :-(
Would you mind telling me what this is all about? Or maybe repost the link?
Thanks again.
LifeMoments:
hmmmm. That is intresting.
ok, I visited your blog. Now I am realy Curios. WEhat is the story here? :)
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